All Comments on 'Ignorance wasn't Bliss'

by Slirpuff

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RePhilRePhil2 months ago

Too many divorcées not enough widowers

RePhilRePhil2 months ago

Btw readers this writer is long gone from lw

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

No way this kind of betrayal be set aside. They might stay together but he, at least, will never feel he's married anymore.

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

Betrayal like this can't be so easily set aside.

Only once it has can counselling even begin to help, if it ever does other than to fill the bank accounts of therapists.

Brcause of that this story doesn't deserve more than 3*, yep people cheat, yep people get caught, that's not the story. The story is in the how they deal with it. Here we get nothing but the bones.

Btrying2Btrying29 days ago

The story teller did a good job. Right suspense and tension. Dialogue is good though a little sparse. I hate the content but it is well presented. I feel shorted on the ending. Too many questions. Most important to me is whose bed is in at the end? Is Jan still sharing it? Of less importance is did he burn the ex-boss? I hope so if only for child support owed.

Thanks for the share even if you aren’t still checking on your work here it is good. John

26thNC26thNC8 days ago

No, you don’t forgive cheating and an 18 year lie.

AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

Short and very sweet - with just enough sourness to wake the senses. A very clever piece of writing.

LA

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