All Comments on 'I'll Always Take Care of You Ch. 03'
by doc87123
- 23 Comments
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI like and enjoy that you added some mystery and sex to gether the suspense is great waiting for part 4
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI am so looking forward to reading about the contents of the envelope, please write more soon.
david1096about 15 years agoI have been waiting, not so patiently, for this chapter and now that I have read it I need the next chapter! Please hurry with the next chapter. I don't think you have scratched the surface of where you can go with this. I hope to see many more adventures of these characters. Thank you.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoAlthough I am not usually a fan of the "group sex" concept, you have managed to (always) present it well and plausibly. Completely aside from that point, this chapter is well-written and fascinating. And most definitely, the next chapter is eagerly awaited.
-- KK in Texas
Anonymousabout 15 years agoAnother great chapter on this storyline, hope you will send the next chapter soon.
digdaddyrichabout 15 years agoThe information that he read at the end of the story has worked up my curiosity, and wonder what he has found out from his dad's last letter. The money figures are way over my head, I wouldn't even know what a billion dollars is about. Thanks for the story.....Rich
Anonymousabout 15 years agoThis is very well written. Please tell us what the letter form his dad says.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoOne of the best stories on this site, please keep on writing, cant wait to find out what the letter said
BUICK GSabout 15 years agoNOBODY, AND I MEAN NOBODY LIKES A SLICK CLIFFHANGER! Now that being said you have a hot property here that nobody should have to demand go keep writing. I hope there are more than one chapter remaining. Keep up yhe good work and I will look for all your future works.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoJust like the first two chapters this one was riveting. I read it as fast as I could and am left wanting for more. Please don't tease us and make us wait too long for the next installment.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI can not wait for future releases of the story and to learn the contents of the envelope. Great ending and gripping way to keep us interested.
I can only imagine what the envelope contains, but I am not guessing.
Anonymousabout 15 years agodoc... good story but this chapter was not up to the caliber of the previous 2 chapters.
marklionabout 15 years agoThat was a great Chapter that you wrote. The other two chapters were little but better but not much. I can hardly wait to see which he do with David, Ellen, Susie, Jen and Jan in the next couple of chapters if it goes that far. I hope David and Ellen live happily ever after together.
Mathilda_20about 15 years agoOh man, don't be evil! Don't leave us with such a teaser.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI had tears . You can certainly grab your audience.
Hurry with the next installment.
Thank you
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI have found the story you have written so satisfying and very well written. Although this isn't incest I enjoy the way you carried their lives out. I do wish that you would finish the story though. I would like to see where their lives lead them. Especially the Arizona home he was supposed to go claim. Thank you for everything so far and I know that I got ahead of myself but I have read this several times.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI have enjoyed reading this a number of times but you need to continue and explain about the contents of the envelope.. Try not to make it devastating but fun and exciting...
Turtle1952over 6 years agoI am intrigued as to what was in the letter and I hope you reveal this in coming chapters. Great read though
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