All Comments on 'I'll Bet You a Latte'

I hope that was a real experience. You did well getting it written down keep at it. I also hope that's your real picture on your profile. Nice :)

Great story! Loved the characters, the storyline, your pacing of that storyline, and your handling of the erotic side of things. I'll be looking forward to further stories from you, Way2cute. Thanks for this one.

LitID: Tyro999

First of all, well done.

Good use of dialogue, and the pacing was spot-on; 90% of excitement is in the head. Some things I'd have liked better (I liked it -we're talking better, not a fault, if you follow me) would be more imagery. What was her dress looking like? Her lingerie? Things that would help me draw a more full mental picture!

I look forward to moar.

Very sexy, well-written and believable. I enjoyed it a lot!!

This is the best first offering I have read on Lit. since I started reading them many years ago. I was delightfully surprised at how well this story was written.

Very nicely done: believable characters, strong dialogue. My only caveat is that someone as cautious as Chris is hardly going to have penetrative sex with a new partner in the absence of a condom.

Thought we were in trouble when I read -- "Well, if you keep it up you'll be carefully looking for somebody when you're eigh four," {"is that like ten ~ four 'Buddy'"?} LOL

Almost did not read the rest but I did and very glad I followed through with the story.!

I think we all sgree ~~ MORE.!!

Very good and yes you got a "5".!*

JAG