All Comments on 'I'll Do It - Finale'

Amazingly hot!

HOTTT!!

5 stars!!

A longer read than Part I but well worth it!!

Is there like a competition or something that we can vote for this in????

Great story! I love that it is based on a friend's experience. Please tell her we LOVED hearing her story. It has been my experience that people that "stumble" into BDSM have this type of experience. (maybe not the huge cock and anal) People with experience in BDSM normally don't mind helping newbies learn the ropes. ;-)

I will echo the earlier comment about the length of story. First chapter was a good length for most people. This chapter is 14,000 words requiring a decent amount of time to read. You should consider doing future stories in more chapters that are shorter reads. This story was around 20,000 words total. 3 chapters of around 7,000 would help someone reading at 2:00am while the family is asleep be able to return to the story and finish it over multiple visits.

Really like your writing. I follow you and look forward to future stories!

I like it. The fake interview sequence is particularly great. And the finale is great too. Maybe should have been split into 2 episodes as others have said...

Great story for those into anal? At least we found you and enjoyed your stories! Please write more...

Good premise.

Too much pain.

Three stars.

Thank you.

Well, what a mindfuck story this was. Superb in the description of what was happening as she was getting ass fucked. How Caroline kept after her with what Caroline would not do but Sarah is doing right now. The very specific details of what Sarah's body is feeling, how her mind was slipping away, how her voice failed her were so realistic and so plausible. Sarah's mind went into a kind of subspace that kept most of the pain away but allowed her body to explode on the sensations of being ass fucked. Seems that Caroline and Mark have a good relationship and are willing to help with another person to flow with that lifestyle. One hopes that Sarah does not become too involved and lose their perspective on life as a whole.

Amazing story. Are you on Fetlife, by chance? I'm Peace-And-Love on that site, and this was a peek into the Lifestyle that I very much appreciated. (but for the curious, experiencing it for one's self is even better)

Outstanding!

Five stars, which I rarely give. I hope that the real woman who is the subject of this account (if such there is) is living a fulfilling, expanded life, sexually, emotionally and professionally.

One of the very best on Literotica.

Keep writing that was grade A+++

Best porn ever........

More please... Lets see where it goes for these characters...

What a great written story ! I hope there will be further adventures of Caroline deepening her control over Sarah.

Wow great story

In my top ten of hottest Literotica stories, and a new favourite author. More please!

Definite "top ten" here as well. Brilliant! Please continue, either with this storyline or something else in the same vein.

Just going to pop out to buy some Velcro right now!

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