All Comments on 'I'll Trade You'

That was nice story you wrote about the daughters' trading their fathers to each other for fun. I like how at the end of the story that you had Brad and Cat in the rec room And Cat told Brad is she is seen him with her mother prior to her mother's death. I hope you read another chapter to this story because there really wasn't any sex between Cat and Brad. I also would love to see the fathers have fun with the daughters like they did with their mothers.

Where is the rest of the story? This is for sure not all of it I hope.

I think the girls could have flashed the men a little tit or pussy around the pool area and that would have broken the ice a little and encouraged comments from the fathers to their own daughters . You really turned on the heat with the description of how the girls were dressed and how they undressed . You could end it now and you could continue , but it's a big challenge .

wonderful but I truly feel it needs more...and is too short!

Follow on? Also where is the incest ?