All Comments on 'Illicit Liaison'

Very hot and well written. My pussy is literally dripping on the floor. Your story gave me a huge orgasm! Thank you.

Or was this hard to read? Sorry, I read it all, and just wasn't thrilled...

great story until you got to the part about the cigarettes. totally turned me off.

Wonderful intro and start. Looking forward to the dating, sharing toys. Hope there are no guys to spoil this loving couple and both comment to a lesbian lifestyle.

Liked this story and feel like other commenters that more about this love story is in order. May add into the story about the daughter taking more control over the mother to demonstrate a submissive affair.

However, keep the guy or guys out of the story as it doesn't mesh with the hot loving, smooth body of a hot girl/woman, etc.

More chapters please.

Topkek made me shoot

Lovely story, well written. Pity about the cigarettes spoiling the end.

We thought this was a lovely story, especially Minnie. But like other comments, we didn't think that the cigarettes at the end added to the quality.

I know a lot of folks think smoking is sexy. I just don't happen to think that a cigarette is anything near sexy! In fact when I read a story, at the first mention of smoking anything I stop reading and move on. Just one of my things I suppose. But I also don't care for folks having to be drunk in order to become involved with each other. Again that is just me I guess. Otherwise it is a good story

great read ,, thank's

Just incredibly well-written and sooo erotic, and beautiful, too !