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Click here"You think?" Scott grinned.
"Oh, honey, last night was just the tip of the iceberg," Jillian laughed.
"What does that mean?" Scott asked, feeling like he was missing the joke somehow.
"Let's just say that you shouldn't take it for granted that it was her ass that she was talking about taking a fucking," Jillian replied, a serious tone in her voice.
"You're kidding, right?" Scott asked, concern now in his. "You gotta be, she couldn't have meant that..."
Scott paused in mid-sentence, realizing that there was really no reason why she couldn't have.
"You're playing with my head," Scott said.
"Maybe, maybe not," Jillian smiled. "She'll be back in New York next month, you can find out then.
"Oh...my...God!" Scott said in a long, drawn out breath.
"Come on, lover, let's go home," Jillian laughed as she took his hand and they headed for the door.
It was going to be a very long month.
END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoNicely layered. Each time the story was upended, the plot veering, then settling on a new take, something would still pop up anew, unexpected, uncertain.
GeorgeAndersonalmost 6 years ago@Ann Douglas, please don't put this one down as one that didn't work. I thought Jillian's leaving Scott hanging was perfectly in character. She wouldn't hurt him for anything, and he knows it, but tease him? Yes, I think so. I think he has a bigger problem anyway: what does he do for her birthday?
GA
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoGood to have a fresh kind of story. The deception was great! This one didn't fail, it's what the reader's own mind thinks. Thank you for the story.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI loved the elaborate misdirection. The way you continued to portray his disappointment was great. I loved that he did not suspect anything and that his wife did not give anything away by her actions. I laughed at those who took something away from the story that wasn’t there. And the nut job complaining about “all that religious shit” is simply that, a nut job. There was nothing you said that could be taken the wrong way and no denying the things you stated do happen. Smart people, whether devout or not, understand that. I also laugh at those who seem to know just how this “fictional story” will play out. I think they forget that you are the author not them. Don’t worry, they whine and complain about any story where the wife sleeps with others and they automatically start screaming how it will end in divorce or with rampant STD’s. Too funny. Please continue this story with another chapter. I’d love to find out where your head has these two going.
deblackbusteralmost 6 years agoLooks like the author has many more stories worth checking out too!
Ann Douglasalmost 6 years agoAuthorA few things in the story seem to have been misinterpreted and I can only blame myself as the author for not making them clearer.
The whole thing was intended as an elaborate fantasy for Scott's birthday, Jillian was also playing a role in how she reacted to Heeja in order to aid in the misdirection. Yes, she and Heeja had been sometime lovers back in college but it was a partnership of equals, not of dominance. When I used the word dominant, I only meant it to describe who was taking charge at that moment. Evidently a poor choice of words on my part.
I am a bit confused as to why some readers thought that Jillian will eventually run away with Heeja because, to me at least, I thought I showed how much she loved Scott and to what lengths she was willing to go to surprise him on his birthdays.
Finally, the whole thing of "was Heeja really talking about Scott ass fucking her or doing it to him" was meant as a joke on Jillian's part. One which seems to have fallen flat. Unlike Johnny Carson, I can’t have them play 'tea for two' and dance my way out of that one.
I've written over 200+ stories over the last 25 years (not all were reposted to Literotica) of many different genres, some worked, some didn't. I guess I'll have to put this one down as one that didn't, at least not completely.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoSo his wife hooks up with heeja,and the marriage come to a end.
etchiboyalmost 6 years agoBut some things wrong after “reveal”.
Heeja was a roommate of Jillian, in a SOROITY (vs a dorm-roommate. They had to be (and obviously were) VERY close friends.
So Heeja is a regular on a soap. Maybe Jillian isnt a huge soap watcher, but some soroity sister is going to inform all the other (certainly of like year) sisters of this.Today with social media, or community emails she’s not going to find out? And if Jillian is that close, and she knows Heeja is on TV, she’s not going to TiVo an episode for Scott to show her very good friend is on TV? I doubt that.
Heeja is intimated as being dominant over Jillian. Scott must notice this over two days of play. Is he going to bring it up with Jillian? Or is he going to try and dominate Jillian in the bedroom? He could bring it in a litttle bit at a time. Telling her to “do” some act, or forcing her head into some position (perhaps forcing a BJ when he used to ask/beg). Not taking “no” for an answer of some position Jillian doesn’t like. Forcing light anal play. A rimming, then the next week a finger tip right at orgasm. Followed by a finger tip during the foreplay. A whole finger. The thumb. Etc. He doesn’t ask, he just “does”. Does Scott take advantage of this?
Does he say, “If Heeja touches my ass, I’m going to fuck yours. No lube. You hear?”
Just some things to think about.
Justgr8almost 6 years agoNot really sure where this story is headed, but writing and pace of story were solid.
