All Comments on 'I'm An Adult Now: Ocean City'

You write very well, but it just seems too fast that Lynn goes from being such a shy, reticent virgin that she can't even TALK to a guy to having a 3-way with her friend and sucking a stranger's dick, all in the space of a few minutes. I know you say she's role-playing, but it seems so jarring and out of the blue. Other than that, well done!

Good read. But none of these guys noticed she was a virgin ?? Not bad. But not realistic for an untried young woman who has intercourse for the first time. An inexperienced girl with experienced guys and they don't realize it?

Amusing turnaround...Can't say I like Hunkus Maximus.

But they all got what they wanted! :+))