All Comments on 'I'm Forever Yours'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Spell-check

Spell-check will provide the correct spelling of “chauffeur”—such careless errors detract from a thoughtful story.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Really enjoyed it

Nice easy pace to follow without too many huh moments.

Main bit I did scratch my head over is why they moved to Hampshire. They were looking to get jobs together which gave impression to find work first. However they went to Hampshire with no work, and as stated the last place they expected to go. Just me left wondering.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice warm story with a tricky theme.

Gigolo not jigalow.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 4 years ago
Good one!!

Enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I think that after reading your stories. The thing that comes out with yours, and other the authors. They write sex stories, where your stories bring out the lives of the characters. Their problems, fears, and built-up prejudice. Then it drench's out to sex, and conmanship.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What can I say? Except another great story. Different than your others, which makes it all of the more interesting. Another 8 stars.

Diecast1Diecast1over 1 year ago

A great, great story. Loved it. AAAAAA++++++

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