by JimBob44
He says he loved her but yet didnothing to try and help her, was she in the wrong? Yes but he stood by and did nothing the whole time, she was crying for help and he did nothing.
Also, he didn't give access to her parents the grandchild, that is fucki g evil.
Was she in the wrong yes, did he try to help her? No, he cannot take thr high ground.
Sad tale of an unguided girl with dead ending
No one... No one including Jimmy ever tried seriously to protect an innocent girl
Heart touching
Rated 5*
Damn you, was she a good person? No, did she try to be? I say yes, dod he try to help find guidance for her? No. She cried time after time for help. He failed her just as much as she failed herself, was she fucked up? Yes but she loved him, and he loved her but he never tried to get her help. Fuck you.
BS she tried to be a good person wether you say so or not. There was not one redeeming quality mentioned about her in this story so you must of known her irl huh? Wasn't his job to get her help and even if he tried its obvious she wouldn't be redeemed until she wanted change. Every chance he gave her she pulled an underhand stunt. He didn't owe her nothing.
Really empathetic view on the reality of addiction, Marla was one of those flawed characters.
Addiction isn't a choice.
Pretty good story. But you really need an editor. It was kind of fractured and jumped around way too much. Created a lot of distraction for the reader.