by cungy22
Both of them need to be murdered brutally, an edge weapon and fire.............I can make it hurt forever........
Ignore the assholes, they only come come on to shoot down people who try to express themselves creatively. Your story was good and a decent setup for a second. Try to proof alittle more carefully or have some1 proof it for you.
Good story ignore the critics and haters their comments are almost always anonymous anyway. Maybe you could write about Anne going home to hubby, maybe getting him to eat some cream pie before letting him fuck sloppy seconds, she said he comes home drunk, hell it might improve their relationship. Keep up the good work.
This is a sex site assholes if you do not like it leave. This is the type of story I want to read when I come to this site. I am not looking to be morally correct.
Apparently I am one of the few readers who thought this story was very erotic and well written Not great literature and brief but very well done for erotic site.
60 year old George
She is in need of a man that will take care of her sexual needs and he seems that he can handle the job. I wonder what is coming up with the principal cheating the state with the computer scam.Maybe he'll be dipping his quill into her also. Thanks for the good read and hope to see a follow up chapter soon.
Fatdaddybitch, you can say a lot of things about this little ditty, but sweet it fucking ain't
...wen i reed a feel gud stori llike this eet maks mee feel so mutch smarder.
I only let men, who show the tiniest bit of attention to me ram any hole they want and lick 'em clean afterwards. Working with kindergarden brains all day must somehow rub off on me, you know? I'm Not Really A Whore, I never took money, cross my heart. Do you have any nice friends that I could meet? "
Excellent cheating story. They have fun and their respective spouses never knows and are not harmed so it is a win win.
she is a newly minted slut, no doubt about that. doesn't matter who else knows the slut will.
To the people who thought this story was good or well written? You must be the biggest ass kissers on the planet. The content sucked. It read like it was written by a fourth grader. You guys think that just because some author wrote something as depraved as you are then must praise it. There was nothing to praise here!
It seems all the world's a cheater. They're all assholes. They all stink. They all should die in pain.
In fact this was his/her/their last story. Too bad.
S/he'll never write agin.
Niver agin?
Dear grungi,
This is nothing compared with having a bunch of rabid MFA poet feminists hate you if you write "heterosexual" "erotic" poems. Me n all me girlfriends were married.
But we were lesbians. No body had any sex. As far as I no.
So what was all the fuss a out?
If I wrote "erotic? Pomes ant women's. They loved me. Thin I started talkin about cocks--re Sharon Olds--
It was ok with them is--SHAROn wrote about cocks. No buddy said SHE wasn't a feminist. Well, if you win a prize for your first book of poetry, an Marilyn Hacker says you're a born poet--an if ANYONE knows, she does. An she also absolutely knows erotic poetry--check out her book of erotic sonnets--to a woman, but real,y, who cares? Man woman transfer ...
Marilyn Hacker is a genius.
R.G.