All Comments on 'I'm Scared, Uncle Bob'

by MisterReason

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nasty

Love the idea of them outside the house with the rest of the family inside. The thrill of getting caught is tough to explain but it's true.

MisterReasonMisterReasonabout 6 years agoAuthor
hello and apologies

First, thanks for reading and commenting.

Secondly, if you are going to comment about the several misspelled words, I'm well aware of them. I suspect I submitted the wrong draft of this story. Anyway, the minute I saw this over coffee this morning, I hurriedly submitted a corrected version to replace this with.

Unfortunately, this process usually takes a couple of days to happen, so until then I will wince and hope readers understand. Thanks

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
Excellent story

Still a virgin, but give a gold BJ.

HOPE YOU HAVE MORE CHAPTERS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
love ur stories

please continue writing

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518almost 6 years ago
Nice work!

Loved this story. The apprehension on both sides. Would have liked a little more background on what drew them to each other. But the sex was hot and the dialogue natural. Well done.

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