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"I am feeling the same way too sexy." as I then got up on my feet, "Do you want it here, or are you going to try and make it to the table?"
"I'm going to try and make it to the table, but I may need some help getting on my feet thou." as she tried to stand up, at which time I took her into my arms, and helped her up.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoGreat; can you do a vintage story, please, of course mom son; abusive father, son saves mom; 1930s, and they openly admit their relationship, and get married and become a family.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI like the fact you write for yourself and don't really care what some think about your writing. You are open for suggestions. The only one I have is a little more editing might serve you well. Keep writing
Anonymousalmost 7 years agowill you be adding more to this story or end it?
Anonymousover 7 years agois going be more chapters ? if so i would to read where they have their foursome and the women do get pregnant 5 stars for all the chapters
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoanon.. you are complaining about the author being repetitive, you forget that it is the way that the world talks. short, compact, and concise. no one says in the middle of having sex, "wait, stop, do you have a medically approved prophylactic?" No! they say, wait, you got a rubber??? so stop complaining about the i's and the t's, and take the story for what it is, ENTERTAINTMENT!!!
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI just didn't like how you used the same words over and over. It became, repetitive
arrowglassabout 8 years agoNot being one to criticize usually, I will tell you the stories could be even better with the help of an editor.
