All Comments on 'I'm Tied Up Tonight'

It’s a reasonably good story overall, I found the “breeder” comment to be a turn off so I’d suggest you include that kind of thing in the Tags section. There are a few disparities that detract from the realism in the characters and storyline, her supposed “strict religious upbringing” didn’t exactly match up with her actions/ behaviour. Similarly Seth’s inner commentary of falling for her a bit was very much at odds with the blatant “bro code” of making sure they both fucked her despite reassuring her of the one to one. It could easily have devolved into a horrific gang rape story but thankfully didn’t.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

The two extra roommates might be called on in any sequel especially if the lady did the calling, repressed longing after her strict upbringing needing a release.