All Comments on 'Immoral Fairytales Ch.01: Going Green'

Wow this story was really hot. The long build up might not be a suited to someone super desperate to get off, but if you have a patience the build up is great. I also loved the elements of mild mind control and reality distortion.

I agree with the other commenter, this had a lovely slow beginning, but wow!

I really enjoyed this, and I am VERY excited to read the next chapter.

As a vegan I loved this 🤣

This may be some of my favorite dialogue on this site. You do a beautiful job of communicating realism, illustrating the difference between each family, painting the evolution of emotions and needs.