All Comments on 'Immortal Sin Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wow is a super story

Hoah yea that super story i'ever read it and keep on going next ch. 03

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
another asshole

good as far as it goes but it took 4years to write this chapter and it's almost 4 more since then and no up date what a waste you should have to pay all the readers for thier wasted time reading your unfinished stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Rob Halford FTW!

Great lyrics you posted in part 1 by ol' Rob. \m/

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