All Comments on 'Imogen and the Immortal'

Loved this story so much!!! Can we have second part please

One of the best I’ve ever read.

That was fantastic. Excellent writing. More please.

Stupendous writing, your style and descriptions might be the best I've ever read on here. I'm not even taking about the sex aspects. You're just a truly great writer.

When it said that he'd come for her daughter, and her granddaughter, did that mean that he was going to defile his own progeny?

Thank you very much to the people who have taken the time to comment. Your kind words mean a great deal to me, and motivate me to keep writing.

@Takenby: The person who requested this story originally asked for the incestuous angle, and I agreed to hint at it but not include it in the events of the story. But the answer is yes, the monster would eventually defile his own progeny. I can only imagine what kind of consequences there are to vampiric inbreeding. Thank you very much for your enthusiasm for this story.

Beautiful and evocative, but also kind of depressing. I had hoped he would leave her alone after breeding her, so that she could live out her days with Frederick and their other children in peace. But I've created a headcanon that Cassius will eventually be killed by his daughters once there are enough of them, especially as they grow more vampiric in strength.

İ enjoy reading ur stories....i think i have a knotting kink cause it can't happen in real....keep up the great writing while remaining safe.

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I enjoy reading ur stories looking forward to more in the future plz be safe.

Extraordinary work.