All Comments on 'Improving Work Performance Ch. 03'

Sorry, I couldn't even get through the first page because of all the errors. Please have someone proofread your work before you post. At the very least, please read it out loud to yourself. That will probably catch 90% of the problems.

Please have someone edit your stories.

... but badly let down by no proof reading. Please read it through or put it through a checker or two before posting. It will vastly improve your rating and the pleasure you give to readers.

Otherwise, nutty but a good read

The story is great, but the errors are terrible. Please proof read so I can rate you higher.

Really enjoyed your story and the characters. As mentioned, please proof read your work. Would really like to see further chapters of this story

As others have said, the story is great, but the writing needs editing. More chapters would be really nice.

LOL good fun, place to work. yes, errors detract but don't let it bother you. complainers probably never write stories themselves