All Comments on 'In A Private Library'

i enjoyed this story very much and would love to hear more stories from you. thank you for sharing your talents with us.

I didn't really get to know the 2 people (I have made the same mistake). I did like the story line though...just my opinion

PJ

Very good for a first story.

Very good for a first story.

You're a very good writer. I can't wait to see more.

I really liked the story but (sorry!) It felt a bit clumsy using the present tense for some reason and it would be nice if it was just a little bit longer maybe. But then I'm never very good at being teased!

I liked your used of the present tense. I think that's hard to do well, but it pulled me in. I also liked the mix of dialog and description. As PJ already said, more about the characters would help me connect with them better and make the story be more compelling. But this is a fine piece of writing.