All Comments on 'In At The Death'

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26thNC26thNC3 months ago

Your mother died at 7. Cold burn.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Have read 5 of your stories tonight 4 great one almost good But you are a good writer (jaybee186)

WolfOfTheWorldWolfOfTheWorld3 months ago

Wonder if the bitch followed her mother into death? I am not saying her mother was also a bitch, just the MCs wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Cruel, great job

xMulexMule25 days ago

That's going to leave a mark.

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I'm English but living somewhere else. If, after a couple months, any of my stories fail to climb above a 2+ rating - I pull them. So stop asking where Family Party went. Sadly more typos are creeping in now, even though I re-read my submissions two or three times. Diabetes is...