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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Absolutely LOVED the tufts of hair on Landon's chest. If he shaved them off before, please let him keep the body hair now -- it's very sexy on him, the chest hair, and the cock hair bush. Love Scotty and Landon together! They need each other!

Montgomery QuinnMontgomery Quinnalmost 3 years ago

Sweet little love story. You've got a theme running. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Want to read more please. I ache for the time apart and the heartbreak it gives both men. I hate the war trauma and physical, mental and emotional injuries that Landon has experienced. But love reading that they are together for the time being and hope for happiness as their story progresses.

LustyScribeLustyScribealmost 3 years ago

Very well done! The mix of (very real) emotions between military personnel and their loved ones...you did that quite well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

First class story, sensitively told.

I really enjoyed this.

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I write a lot of things. Erotica is one of them. I'll share my best work with the world someday. While everyone else sees me cut my teeth.