All Comments on 'In Deeper'

Never had a first date at a nude beach, but this story sure brought back memories of the early fumblings of inexperienced lovers in the dorm room at University. While we both enjoyed the learning experience, I wish we could meet again with the wisdom of taking one's time and tasting each other.

I don't recall my female partner being quite so forward but I still found the story to be four star stimulating.

...don't you think?

I enjoy conversational stories, rather than pure narrative. I also enjoy stories where the characters like each other and are not trying to get the

advantage over their partner(s).

I do hope you keep going with this story, I like the direction it is going...Keep the story going for all 3 involved too, not just between Steve and Grace, also include Eleanor and all the familys...please consider it...thank you

Another short (too short !!!), story of damned good writing and characters.

Of getting Eleanor into bed with Grace and Steve?

the characters really liked each other and talked to each other as equals, maybe she was a bit more equal, more aggressive than he which seems a bit surprising given her background, but she was a nudist, so maybe had more "balls" than one would ordinarily think. This story seems like several I've read from Alex, that is the pool, the nude beach, the bed activities, and the shower and food were all very similar, but the characters were new, and the reasons for the activities, were different, so it was a very entertaining story, and offers the opportunity for one's imagination to carry it further. Unfortunately, Alex normally doesn't continue his stories as most people suggest; he leaves that to us to do in the privacy of our own bed accompanied by our five-fingered friend. Thanks, Alex, for a good going-to-bed stimulus.

No pretense, nothing hidden, and certainly no agenda other than making the other feel good and in return receiving pleasure. This is how all lasting relationships should begin. I hope you would consider continuing this story or these characters as they go to college possibly interacting with Ellie in the future. So that Grace can thank her for her taking the time with a young man to guide him in his lessons of love. For she prepared him for his time with Grace.

Need to add more to include more years of there togethernest.

In my view, the author has great talents in not only describing sexual moments but the minds of People who are engaged. I am looking Forward to seening more of this.

A truly fun pair of stories!!! Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story!

It is a great story. Too bad it usually didn't happen that way for me. I know you aren't writing now, but if you decide to, this would stand a followup. I do enjoy your stories. I'm about half way done.