All Comments on 'In Dreams Ch. 01'

I REALLY enjoyed that. I enjoy reading your work, you have a writing style that is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.

Wow!! I really like that one! Again, I have to refer to my second wife. There was so much magic in our relationship, so much wonder and beauty.

We didn't dream alike as the characters in your story, but we did have a telepathic connection of sorts. I worked out the details of what made it work correctly after several months of us feeling the presence of the other. I won't go into the details here, but suffice to say that we freaked out coworkers and friends several times announcing the arrival of the other one moments before they got there. It's a crying shame that her mind snapped. I really miss her.

This is a very erotic premise, and you have developed it beautifully. Looking forward to your next chapter.

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