All Comments on 'In Dreams She Came Pt. 08'

Story is being ruined with the flashbacks to 1789. Characters are becoming a blur.

I should have included this with part 7.

Looking forward for more

Fiery and explosive depiction of Sexual Acts,orgy at zenith

Please bring it down to earth , a 'Hard reality'

I at first was thinking Lazarus would be the main des demona now I'm thinking Mona. The flash back characters can be a bit confusing, but it is understandable dealing with the passages of time. I will be waiting for the next Acts and chapters I 'm enjoying this story. I commend you on keeping this on point and direction and not wandering.

the next part is the start of Act 3. in it, I will try to tie all the flashbacks together into a logical flow.

I am thoroughly enjoying this story and hope it continues very soon.

I am REALLY hoping that act 3 finds Chris watching some more of the bands videos, or maybe a livestream concert, and sees Jenny having sex as part of the show.

Keep up the great writing and cant wait til the next installment drops.

While I enjoy this series more than his others, I find it curious that he still can't lay off the ingrained tropes of the dumb MC who always senses danger but never recognizes or acts on it until much too late.