All Comments on 'In for a Penny'

I wondered where this would go as I began the story. I found myself disappointed with the flow, poor spelling at times, a lack of sentence structure and grammar. What bothered me the most was the implication the girl was under the age of 18. Why wasn't this caught by the moderators? It could have been a very good story had you taken the time to make it about love instead of a drunk being taken advantage of. I realize it's your first story, but there are standards required for higher ratings, this one left me wonting. 2* for trying.

Yeah - I'd definitely read the next part of this tale - for sure.

Outstanding back story and amazingly descriptive bedroom scene. Maybe , hopefully a followup?

The dad was a real asshole! He calls her over, gets hammered and shit happens. Don't be pussy, melt down and put a guilt trip on someone who cared enough to come to your aid..

Is Part II in the works? If Mr. Mathison is white, can he have a dusting of sexy chest hair for that manly chest? Give them a second chance!

My jaw is sore after a long cock sucking session with a hung guy, all good fun; I like your story.