All Comments on 'In Germania Ch. 02'

You wrote the words "pleasure given shape"! I'm blown away, it's indeniably a hot, hot story then you go and write a perfect gem like that. I'm going in the corner to bang my head, I yearn for lovely phrasing like that. I look forward to the next chapter, hope Rome isn't going to be trouble.

That was a beautiful turn of words that seeker71 highlighted, and something to be proud of. Great chapter!

This is a most beautiful and entertaining story. I love how it unfolded and Ulric went back to Rome with Cassius.

I'm very interested in reading more of your work. I loved your last story as well.

Happy Writing!

I'd love to read a third chapter, maybe a threesome that involves Cassius's friend Portius. Or, I'd love to read about Cassius and Ulric's son, with Ulric watching. Oooh that would be hot. Loved both chapters.

I loved this story. So well written. More more more! :)

i agree with the others. I only wish ulric had admitted he loved him. one of his attractive qualities was the fact that the big barbarian could be sensitive. I am also glad he returned to Rome with him and even brought his kids. i'd I'd have liked to know if his father accepted the pair but something tells me they wouldn't have cared one way or the other.

cannd

I'm so wet I can die!!! I would love to have read him with the sons! Father and on fucking Cassius. I'm so horny and god that was just hot!!! But I do agree I would have liked for ulric to have said he loved him. But I loved this!!!

I would love to see more of these two. the story was well written and kept me interested and held my attention the whole way through.

Loved it!!

Love this so much. Sad to see it's over! Wish there was more. Maybe an epilogue?