All Comments on 'In Her Room, Afterwards Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Slight Disappointment...

...that the flatmate turned out to be a guy - the tone in the first couple of paragraphs seemed to indicate a woman.

Other than that, let's see how Ch. 2 turns out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

Hope there's more

humminbeanhumminbeanover 13 years ago
Off to a thundering start

Wonderful More, please! (There's something about the mental image of a knight in shining armor saving the maiden who's been overcome by her own frigging ...)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Damn lol

I thot the roomie was also a girl!

lol

DrmaxcDrmaxcover 13 years ago
Original

What an excellent start to a story. I am intrigued and look forward to finding out what has been going on - you leave various things hanging. Definitely needs Ch. 02

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