All Comments on 'In Hot Water Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WAUW ! nice cliffhanger !

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Keep writing please. Thanks.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Damn it! Two pages of boring beach house stuff, then when you finally get to the good stuff, you take a break! Argh! 5/5

CammyGoesDownCammyGoesDownover 2 years ago

I really hope to read the end of this story at some point.

WatcherEyeWatcherEyeover 1 year ago

This is getting more and more exciting. Looking forward to find out what their stepmother had texted Jessica in the first place.

Wondering if the red-cloth scene is mere nostalgia and comfort, or does it have any other symbolic meaning?

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Final part of In Hot Water should be out circa 1st of September. Let me know if you have comments or questions.

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