All Comments on 'In Katie's Room Pt. 01'

by JackBandit

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice twist

Very good, nice build up. Look forward to part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More....

More, more.... Great story!

JackBanditJackBanditabout 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the good comments so far, guys! I promise, Part 2's coming right up. As soon as I'm done editing it, it'll be coming your way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Ha!

Great story, totally got me! Hope to read more soon, well done!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 8 years ago
I knew the twist coming....

and didn't care. Enjoying this so much. Full mark ! *****

Black_JadeBlack_Jadeabout 8 years ago
poor guy

Can't wait to see what happens!!

tatlockstatlocksalmost 8 years ago
Clever story....

Thanks for an interesting story. It got me in though my judgements not good when I am excited !

Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

What a set-up. Can't wait to read the second chapter immediately

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nah

Buildup to nothing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good setup.

But just preliminaries.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Tricked me. Let’s see where it goes.

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