by MaryannePeters
Love the story. I wish that was my life. I'm a stopped transitioning mtf. Older and hard to become who I really am. Keep writing. Love your stories
Thought I heard banjos playing in the background for a bit there, lol. Kind of strange story but I liked it. Kind of a twist in the end when Haddon didn't want Lilly/Lizzie to have a pussy and instead he went looking for something else with a dick. It was nice that the dad came to his senses and didn't force Lizzie into having sex with him. Not too bad for a two page story.
This was an amazing story! From a premise that some other writers might be tempted to use as a premise for a shallow and lurid story and instead infused it with a character who’s journey I actually got invested in and a twist with the father and brother that was refreshing. Good show!