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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Fantastic!

This was amazing!

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 3 years ago

That was great, especially for a first post. I would like to read more about this couple of you write about them. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This was great, especially for a first time posting. Not a criticism as it was still easy to follow but have you got someone to proof read for you? Just a few words missing/tenses mixed.

Sexual content read like a good how to (with consent and communication as well) and I enjoyed the narrator’s POV.

Well done and thank you!

Helen1899Helen1899about 3 years ago

Good story, more from this couple please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I would love to see where this goes. It seems like it could have a long term ending. Please write the sequels. You have the ability to write.

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Aspiring author. Seems I can't keep a story short unless it's about sex ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Even so, be warned my stories can be lengthy.