by norafares
Excellent story well written thank you for sharing your writing.
Very entertaining and thought provoking.
Chuck
Okay, I don't comment on stories even though I've been on this site for years but this is so good. 5stars no doubt.
Her stories always touch me. They open my heart and lead me to my own emotions that I thought I had kept tucked away so well.
I am always impressed by how well she develops and tells her stories. She always finds the right words, plays with language, creates images in your mind that strike strings of your own emotions so that you feel like you are right in the middle of it.
You can't possibly top that !
Chapeau !!!
5*. A very powerful and sincere story. There are some gaps. For example, no way that a hospital would demand a pre-pay for a life-saving operation, and unclear why Booker did not look up June after the divorce, and indeed not clear why Kansas and Booker did divorce. But those are minor issues that do not depress rating to a 4. No one could read story without wetting the eyes.
I will now have to read all the other stories by author.
I can't believe I've not read this amazing story until now. Thank you so much, Nora! 5 huge stars.
A heartbreaking story of love, friendship and betrayal. I could not have any sympathy for the cheaters.
Brilliant! 5 stars. I’m so glad I came across this story, so well written. Thank you for your hard work
Second read... still just as impactful as the first time, and 5 stars again for this tale of love, betrayal, cheating, redemption, forgiveness, loss, and reunion.
Please keep writing... you do it so very well !
Poignant. Pathos, the agony and the ecstasy, the bipolar roller coaster of emotions. The depth of your stories and relationships are what I read for so that I can live vicariously and see why own relationships fail. I'm glad I pass on all the other shallow stories about sex, incest, rape, polyamory, and snuff stuff.
Someone is cutting onions near me.
A complex story, each in their own way trying to do their best, yet hurting each other so.
Stories with complexity and an ambiguity in the morality are rare on Literotica. A wonderful tale.
Now who is it who is cutting onions.
Like so many others have said, this lady can damn sure write a story. This was a long but ultimately great story. I loved it again.