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by islandgreengirl

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Confused and poorly-written.

Seth/Sean/Duane? Who?

You need to pay attention to what you write before you submit to here.

Some of the writing was very good, you took me inside your head.

But you need to exercise a lot more care.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hot!!

I completely disagree... I thought it was hot... and I am anxiously awaiting chapters 2 through ?????

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