All Comments on 'In Step Ch. 04'

What a hopelessly mushy story. That's probably why I like it so much. Full points.

can't wait for the next episode!

I can't wait for the next chapter,a classic....

Still giggling at the paddle boat comment from George. Thanks so much for sharing your writing.

It seems that the trust between parents and children is being eroded as the secrets grow by the day. The sex is getting better and is quite torrid for folks who are just getting to know one another. There are lots of chapters to go, and I'm really enjoying this story. It is both erotic because adults have found what pleases them, and because the kids are doing things that I used to do. My favorite location was a couple of local lakes where skinny dipping was private; I was hoping our Kendall and Mark would find one in this episode, but alas, they got it on in a different, possibly more erotic situation. There's more to come and I can't wait - on to Ch. 5. Thanks for the good works.

Loved it! Hope Mark gets his wish to fuck Donna and Kendall her wish to fuck George.

This story is gonna keep me up half the night. Can't put it down!