All Comments on 'In the Alley'

by compassrose004

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vodiodo69vodiodo69almost 2 years ago

Loved the bedtime story! Take me. Thanx!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What a stud. "What's his name?" HA - that was a great ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Would LOVE to develop this into a story! "Wonder what his name was" is the great beginning for chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was so bad I almost died

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I will admit that this sort of scenario always flashes across my mind whenever I see a handsome man. And because I am really attracted to big men, this is audio really did it for me. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Welp... I need a continuation of this badly

ddominiqueddominiquealmost 2 years ago

Awesome story. It's true that this is a common fantasy. You're an amazingly visual storyteller. You have a great voice and may wish to consider audiobook narration.

For the Anonymous who didn't care for it, show yourself -- and feel free to do better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I enjoyed this fantasy! I agree with your observation about fantasies that I or most women (one hopes) wouldn't want in the real world; it feels parallel to why people enjoy the horror films, or rollercoasters, or what makes vampires sexy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

One of the things I enjoyed most about this story is your absolute accuracy of what a woman would be thinking in that situation (at least for me). The moment where he took off the bra and threw it away, and there was a quick thought of "but that's my nice bra" was just incredible. You really do paint a wonderful story and your voice is absolutely delicious. I'll be keeping my eye on you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is hot!! I definitely listened to it a few too many times

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved this story just because the thoughts of the woman were really accurate, well done!

ZingingCutie23ZingingCutie23over 1 year ago

I thought I’d heard excellent audio erotica, but this was by far the best thing yet. Fuuuck more please like this.

ZingingCutie23ZingingCutie23over 1 year ago

p.s. OH MY GOD!!! I just saw your page and realized it’s a series. So excited, can’t wait.

Karmaremi666Karmaremi666over 1 year ago

This definitely did it for me. And then made me chuckle with " I wonder what his name is "💜

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There are three things that are important in the creation of great art: Story, Story, and Story. And while I would never call what I do “great art,” I do enjoy telling a good story above all. I suppose these stories can be divided into two types: 1. Rough, for those who get ...

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