All Comments on 'In The Backseat With My Sister'

Let it be a fun weekend...continue please!

I'm sure you haven't touched all the desires that make you a wet pussy writer, but you make me a hard reader. I gave you 5 stars and hope than you make Lucy become a real slut for his brother.

Absolutely fantastic!! Should be rated much higher!! Can't wait for more from you!!

Extremely hot forbidden fruit! I can't wait to find out what kinds of fun Lucy has in store for this boring family trip!!

Wow, another unoriginal, inconceivable backseat story. Writer? Yeah not so much forsure.

Now I really liked this story, I'll read the others when I've got some time. Thank you Julia.

They are English but you have written all the conversation in American. And English men don't need lube because they don't suffer from genital mutilation like Americans.

"My dad opens the car door, ..." and exclaims: "Holy shit, this cars smells like a brothel!"

But, yes, I know, in the fantasy land of porn and erotica there's no STDs, unwanted pregnancies or revealing odors....

I really enjoyed reading your story.

Very well written.

Please continue

Lucky, lucky siblings

That was short, sweet and HOT. Keep it up.

Reminded me of when I fucked my sister.

I love stories that gradually build, my cock hardening all the time, squeezing and rubbing until I just can't resist, wanking and cumming. Thank you. Success.

Please, please continue! 5/5

Very nice, thanks! 5/5

Please continue that’s was an amazing story

This was an awesome story.. Needs fsr more chapters!!!

Just claim slut Lucy as yours for life. I hope she carries another person home with her after the vacation. Of course, she won't find out for a couple weeks after returning home. Next episode please. 5☆

That was fun!

Usually I like a slow burn type of story, but the lust in these two characters comes out very powerfully (pun intended)!

Can't wait to read more!

Fun, short story, thank you!

I found the beginning a bit tough to read. Perhaps some editing or proofreading? I'm also not sure what to make of Lucy. We're told she's modest and bookish, but everything she actually does contradicts that.

Yes it is!! Please continue.

So nice to see an opportunity taken advantage of. Too often archaic mores cloud natural urges.

Sexy risky little romp. More please, what is the weekend like for them?

Really good stuff, surprisingly well paced and developed characters for such a short story. A true rarity!

Loved it. Planned seduction with the feet then the face to achieve a long held fantasy. The aspect of sneaking it under Dad’s nose in the back of the car just makes it even more interesting. Naughty fun!

Loved it, but how dud the dad not smell the sex in the air

It was pretty sexy. Loved it

Awesome! Please continue.

Great little short story. Would love a longer story about the upcoming weekend! 5 Stars.

Nicely written in my favorite trope! It needs thd next part where the siblings have sex while the dad drives.

Implausible but hot. I enjoyed it. I wonder if she's on birth control, or if she just risked getting knocked up by her own brother.

Enjoyed the story. Can't wait for more stories from you

Sisters are always the best, especially when they get along with their brothers!

It could be the start of a brilliant weekend.

Really hot! Loved it!

Great story!

Cheers

SAGE

Damn this was super hot!

No way dad doesn't smell the hot sex. Good story though.

Great stosy got me hard real fast of I didn’t last long after smearing all the precum around I blasted off. I had such a blast I had to read it twice second was as good as the first I lasted a little longer and exploded even more keep the story coming so I can do the same

Man I am drowning in pleasure

Very good! Even though I would have liked a little more background on Lucy. Does she have a thing for her brother? Or was she just horny and Brad was conveniently handy, ready for action? I hope that she has been crushing on her brother and loves him. Sex for the sake of just sex is disappointing. But I still gave you 5/5.

'I smell sex', says dad.....

'What have you two been up to?'

4 stars in spite of that glaring mistake...