All Comments on 'In the Bathroom'

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Rainyday493Rainyday493about 2 years ago

😂 Reliably randy family shenanigans. 5⭐

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Total bullshit!!!!!!

DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

This was a very hot story, very entertaining. But I felt they rushed rushed to the sex pretty quickly. Sometimes its fun to show some hesitancy because they know taboo it is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

"rejecting my most precious possession..." Literally LMAO at that line. Takes an already silly premise, and just drives it straight to parody town. Couldn't finish the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The dialogue was bad enough, but when you got the parents involved too, it just went completely off the rails.

GinafrommaineGinafrommaineabout 2 years ago

Love it. I was quickly wet the moment the son impaled his mom on his cock. Til the end of the story. Being DP’d by a husband / son or father / son is so very hot.

sp9983sp9983about 2 years ago

I liked the moral of the story,

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 2 years ago

Damn, ever since I was a teen I want to fuck my half sister. She had what I’d say were 38 DD tits that even after 2 kids didn’t sag much. How do I know this you ask? Well one winter the Columbia rive in Portland Oregon flooded and the water stopped in their front yard so they had to stay with my parents and I for a week. I came home from school and didn’t think she’d be in my room changing and I walked in. There she was standing there topless facing me. I was 12 and just starting puberty. Got an instant hard on. Never have forgotten that. 😛

ParttimehobbyParttimehobbyabout 2 years ago

Good story, maybe a bit rushed in the "end" butt still enjoyable. For all of those that trash a story for one reason or the other, get over yourself. These are stories and an erotic use of the imagination. Enjoy them for the effort and the temporary escape from your current situation. Sorry about the soapbox in the middle of a comment. I really did enjoy the story.

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...