All Comments on 'In The Death Cell Ch. 02'

Ends on a high note. But he really doesn't know this woman. Good story, though.. D

4/5 Good one.

jopstorm1945

Love the story an especially loved the ending so glad he didn’t take the cheating wife back. The only slight thing I didn’t like was him saying Carrie told him where he went wrong so he could learn what not to do with maddie if he put that effort in his first marriage maybe the affair wouldn’t of happened BUT I’m NOT blaming him I just didn’t like him taking the higher ground totally

Loved this. A plain-spoken blue-collar guy who stuck to his convictions and explained them plainly to everyone. That's the best. And though it's rare, it is possible for a pretty girl to want to be with a blue-collar guy, especially if she was raised that way. She could see the value there. I've seen it. Great story!

Well written. Realistic storyline. Enjoyable.

Good he didn't take back the ex. Dan And Jane behaved. Need part 3

Chapter 3? Great story, but, needs completion. Thank you.

And?????

Be so kind as to call FTDS to help you with a finish, this story deserves it. Great to this point though.

"... whoa is me feelings..." It's "woe is me"

Ughhh! Wish you could finish the story. Was on its way to a solid 5 until the abrupt end.

MC came off like a total creeper.

GLine, what the fuck are you rambling about?

Holy shit , you didn't make him cuck into taking the whore back .

Amazing .

5 stars