All Comments on 'In the Family'

Terrible. She's your princess and your slut in the same sentence. Poor grammar and punctuation as well.

A little father-daughter bonding is so salacious and fun!

Grammar and punctuation are fine.

Story moves right along, rat-a-tat-tat.

Suggestion: the last line should be its own paragraph.

Looking forward to find out who was lurking!

Cheers!

Really? I doubt that.

Even if you have this rubbish translated into readable English it will still be the worst story ever.

A well deserved one star. Ever heard of respect?

Could use some proofreading, and a few writing errors like both speaking in the same paragraph, but lots of dialogue, and hot illicit sex.

I don't agree with the negative comments, but it might be a matter of preferences.

Will there be a sequel including Mom in the loving? .

I'm not sure why someone even made that comment. Most sluts I know are princesses in every day life. I personally just didn't like this story. Some parts are more over written, while others are lacking. Also, mentioning the word count in the description is a major braggy move, for no reason.

I’ve definitely read better, this shit was awful. If you’re gonna write a story then at least write with proper grammar and punctuation. You have auto correct ffs use it

Are you still writing? you need to finish this story.