All Comments on 'In The Knickers of Time Ch. 01'

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MaonaighMaonaighalmost 2 years ago
A slightly odd...

...and charming chapter. Loved the pun title (it would never have occurred to me to use knickers as a basic plot theme). If the following chapter is as good as this one, I'm going to enjoy it. Certainly a five-star tale to kick off with. I'm sure you'll know it but another delightfully erotic Courbet painting is Femme Nue Couchee.

yowseryowseralmost 2 years ago

Enchanting

Lovely tale, sweet, descriptive, sensual.

And love the title.

sellersricksellersrick3 days ago

I really like your style of writing NJ and the characters. Looking forward to reading the rest of these chapters and other adventures.

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Retired but still practising academic, specialist in language and literature. Highly sexed and sexual but not so active in the last few years. Enjoy writing erotic stories, which reveal favourite themes and features.

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