All Comments on 'In the Nest with Christie Ch. 01'

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey6 months ago

I really liked that! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

So far so good

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Different, but I like your style. More please

TheLastChaosLordTheLastChaosLord6 months ago

Looks like this has some potential. Looking forward to the follow up.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Well outlined circumstances establishing the parameters of your situation.

Characters identified and tensions pre-heightened.

Nicely done, and expecting the following to blossom.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Bwahahaha absolutely delightful writing style! I look forward to reading more. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I won't rate this story because it's nothing......... yet.

I know it's chapter 1, but it doesn't even have a story except for embarrassing events.

Write about Christie getting her stepbro's cock in her mouth and pussy. Hopefully dressed in sexy lingerie. Not this same as every other story nudity.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I take it there's a to more coming. Nothing's happened so far. And why is it that most of these "Incest" stories have "step" sister or "step" something. The category is "incest, taboo" but it appears the writer jus can't deal with it. Believe it or not some of us find incest really hot.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

If this turns into one of those 100 single page chapter at a time stories I am going to be soooo p.o.'d

No ☆'s till something happens

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

No naked females, no fucking, just talk about jerking off. What good is that? And what's up with the "step" sister? I thought the category was "incest, taboo," If they're "step" siblings how's it incest?

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