All Comments on 'In The Queue'

by GeorgieH

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

The too short story may have left us up. In the air but it was hot and wet. Guess we'll just have to imagine what happened next for the two ladies.

cowgirlsrulecowgirlsruleover 9 years ago

Love this story! Wish more people wrote hot wetting stories. Nicely done.

ScattySueScattySuealmost 10 years ago
A tale of the unexpected!

A twist in the tail worthy of Roald Dahl - very well done.

peebudypeebudyover 12 years ago
pee-utiful

as you can tell by my name (and stories page) I love a good pee story, and yours was great. especially the twist at the end. well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Haha.

Loved it. Funny. Well written. (5 score). Sexy(ish) - implausibility clause invoked.

Pity more won't read this because of the category in which it's placed.

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Good writing

No quibbles, just a good laugh. A story well told.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
Delightfully well-written

Thank you.

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Always searching. Now I'm back writing a lot as well. I want to thank everyone for some great feedback, and as promised, new chapters of all sorts of tales will appear very soon. I want to thank everyone who has taken the time to send me messages (mostly) of support, and I wan...