All Comments on 'In the River, on the Rocks'

A very good story! I've been dreaming lately about making love under a little waterfall ... Very well written, and humorous too at the end ... Reminds me of a trip I took as a teenager down a river in MO. So many fun places to play ... And sometimes, you can even use the girlfriend's car as a tent at night! In the presence of a bunch of other CHURCH friends ... Ha ...