by submissa
This storyline and characters going to be interesting and fun and … . Can imagine the puddle, keg and her appearance not to mention smell. Would be nice to hear more than “blah” biographically, but your call of course.
You have a very nice style of writing, and the setup for future chapters was splendid. I’m already hooked. Seeing as this chapter was one page, I hope another chapter will be coming in the near future. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿
What a wonderful introductory chapter. Lady Lisle is an intriguing character. I look forward to reading just how strict she is. 5 stars is appropriate, I believe.