All Comments on 'In Your Dreams Ch. 01'

Sad but erotic. Looking forward to how it plays out.

Well written and erotically suspenseful. Hoping there is going to be a part 2.

Also enjoy having a laugh at the anonymous comments from the angry moron brigade!

Fantasy play of this type is an iffy proposition for married couples on any day. But when a husband, or wife, finds there is a basis of fact behind the person in their spouses dreams (fantasy), then it is absolutely time both of them wake up! Louis made a fatal error by being too vague regarding his feelings about Maria's dream issues. He should have been calm but direct, expressing his concerns that she seemed so infatuated with someone else. Something had to kick start her dreams, surely we are not to believe Maria is some type of clairvoyant or mystic. Perhaps the truth is that she is projecting her real desires for someone she already knows into her dreams. Whatever the case, Louis never should have assisted her by engaging in the role play. The whole 'I don't own you' bit is bulls**t! Of course he does! He has a contract that says so! Conversely, Maria owns Louis. NO, it isn't an ownership of property like any tangible goods that can be purchased. Married people own their spouses by paying for them with an equitable purchase price that is comprised of themselves. 'I am giving me, to you, in exchange for you.' I believe we have so much divorce these days because people don't understand the concept behind this form of ownership. People enter too easily into marriage, thinking too much about a 'lease with an option to buy...if things work out!' Maria is exercising her lease on Louis, while Louis is thinking about how he has loaned out his purchase. What I have noticed about these cuckold themes is that the husband's always seem to come to a realization that they are powerless. She's going to cheat, he can't or won't stop her. So he decides to just 'deal' with it. Louis is doing this. We see where this road is going and it's time to turn the car around. - TANSTAAFL

If the author is going for any kind of realism in the next chapter Louis and Maria will be getting separated at the very least.

He told her he wasn't ok with her fucking Warren multiple times. Instead of respecting her husband's wishes she waits until they're having fantasy phone sex about her dreams to finally get him to say yes.

Maybe they overcome this but, there's no way he really feels good about it in the light of day tomorrow morning.

A really nice twist to the story would be for Maria to come home and tell Louis that when she was confronted with the reality of it her dreams just faded away and she remembered how much she loved her husband and she couldn't go through with betraying him like that.

Never ceases to amaze me the people who keep reading stories like this and then say that they're offended ... lol! Good writing, very erotic, well paced, screw those who don't think so!

im not sure about this , its good but im thinking louis is having feelings that are gonna change,, looking forward to more ,, thanks for sharing

5 Stars

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved

Dialog is more difficult to accomplish than narration, but it's far more erotic for me, making your story much more personal. It makes the characters more real, and you do a great job writing dialog. You also allow the reader feel the dichotomous feelings both the husband and wife are experiencing, a roller coaster of confliction between sensibility and lust. Nearly error free too, except for the wife being in L.A. for a moment.

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Nice work. I'm looking forward to chapter two. Thanks.

This story is very good. The build up is pretty intense. The raw emotions and inner struggles versus the sheer eroticism. Very nicely done.

My wife fucked a coworker at a conference. When she got back I had mixed emotions but damned if it be so hot didn’t turn me on. We fucked like rabbits for a couple of months. Then it happened. We decided she could fly out and spend a week with him. That was incredible. That was the last time she saw him but she said they probably fucked four or five times each day.

I liked this. I want part 2 soon.

Love the angry insecure anonymous little men frothing at the mouth

Superb and sexy! Good feelings! Pleasure over jealousy! Thank you!

Those anonymous believe they own their love. Are they telling their wife what they are reading on literotica? Why not "share your values" whit your wife?

I rarely ever masturbate to these stories. This one did it. This is a 5 many times over

This is really well done. I love the realistic dialog and the slow motion buildup. With just a touch of interesting weirdness as regards the dreams. Keep going!

Great story, and I hope you keep writing.

Ignore the trolls. When I see a story I don't like, I move on to something else. They are so far into the Cuckold closet that they have to get angry to assure themselves they are not turned on by it.

Sincerely,

Cuckold Paul

FANTASTIC story!!!!! Really exciting!!!! Congratulations!!!! Please, go on with the story soon... ;-)

To the author, thank you kindly for taking the time and making the effort to write this story. I read it and enjoyed it.

I note, as per usual, that group of “readers” have decided to rubbish your work. This is unfortunately common in the “Loving Wives” section of this website.

I’m not sure if you are aware of it, but you have a great deal of power when it comes to comments. I encourage you to delete the comments which are rude and useless. You do have that power, author. Below is the process you need to follow to delete all of the rude comments.

1. Log-in to Literotica

2. Click on Works on the left hand side in the Literotica control panel

3. Locate the story in question

4. Click on the “word bubble” icon on the left, on the far right hand side of the story you have located

5. Locate the comment you wish to delete and then click on the rubbish bin on the far right hand side of the comment in question

6. Click on delete comment, and you’re done.

Trust me and believe me when I say that these trolls will soon grow weary of posting nasty comments on your work if you just delete all their comments quickly, consistently, and without any mercy.

Good story. Loved the sharing of her dreams. Disappointed in Louis as a man, but we'll see what happens in part 2. If it were to happen to me I'd pay my lawyer extra to have her served with divorce papers when she got off the plane. She'd have to take a cab home to find all her shit in the yard. Maybe Louis and Maria will have a hppier ending.

Intense, hot, exciting, oh I am coming