All Comments on 'Inanna's Descent into the Underworld Ch. 03'

I love this chapter! The twist brings so much depth to the story now. Please continue!

Lol thanks for liking it... others don't seem to though

love the series. your writing style really suits the setting, and i am enjoying this new fetish ;) keep it up!

yay thank you :p

I remember hearing about this oldest of tales, and to me it has always been less straightforward and more complex than any Greek myth.

I really think you did the mystique of Inanna justice with this chapter; it's very powerful and loaded with symbolism and thoughts of legend, in how a story might "explain" how the world came to be how it is. One of my professors back in college would have loved this story for that.

Incidentally..."Pazuzu"...the only other time I have been aware of that name was in The Exorcist II. ;) Although that's quite a boring movie, overall. Your Pazuzu is MUCH more interesting (and therefore frightening).

I also like this Ninshubur, but just personally. She's sweet. ^_^

Nice work.

Yay thank you! :)

It's really my own twist on the myths, I actually am quite inclined to that school of that that says the Anunnaki were not in fact deities, but extra-terrestrial beings! If they actually existed and the stories weren't the 10,000BC version of Babylon 5 or Star Trek, that is... lol

Gorgeously written literature. Induced a rare, deeply powerful response. Much more than the usual erotic writing, prose true and reminiscent of the best of ancient texts, either sexual or mythical. Stays in my body and mind with more than human pleasures, especially the re-animating transformations, which are superb, very gifted, celebrating impossibly beautiful strengths of body subjected to lush erotic terrors. The bending of wills and bodies reconstitute the idea of the sensual, human and celestial. Thank you so much.

I think you should write more about Pazuzu. This was a fascinating story indeed, live Mesopotamia.

Please keep writing this series, it is amazing!