All Comments on 'Incentive Executive'

Excellent story, and a very good ending. I just wish our firm had such an incentive scheme.

Keep up the good work, and very well done.

Albiet it leaves me wondering why did it stop abruptly, or atleast that is how i am understanding it... May be taurents can comment better... is it over? If you can write a mail back, I am at bigc_girl 78@yahoo.com

Many thanks

Admirer

What a wonderful, well written fantasy. Loved every minute of it... as long as I remembered it was FANTASY. You write well. Keep it up.

excellant story! I love it. I would love to hear about the ending with Helen, Tony and his wife. very well written.

also, what about trevor? more please.

Great work, inventive and well written.

Any chance of continuing it further. What happens after the year is up? Does Helen recruit a young helper for the number of reps she has to see?

Anyway, a fabulous story and beautifully written. Once started I had to read it all the way through.

Keep on writing please.

aa1man:hotmail.co.uk

Great, detailed, erotic, delicious.

Nice one.

This could go on further it is fun.