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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago
Still running strong!

Not sure where you're headed with Riley? She may be the answer to being a cover for the outside world if they got married, but the path you're on of her and Josh not connecting physically is not "real" and I start have problems with stories that disconnect from human nature. If Riley and Josh don't connect on a physical and emotional level, then there's no "real/believable" way Em and Riley and Josh will coexist. 5* but I see a couple cracks forming...

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LATEST (September 17, 2023) Hi everyone! I want to apologise for going radio silent for several months now. Life has been a clusterfuck and I'm only getting back to writing since a few days ago. It feels like my creativity is slowly coming back, but it's pushing me to make s...

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