All Comments on 'Incessant Pt. 05'

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Demosthenes384bc over 3 years ago

Wow - covering all the bases still. Interested to see where the relationship with Riley goes...with each of the family. 5*

gametime279 over 3 years ago

Yikes!

Hitting us with the cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens with the aunt, I'm also very curious if the girl at the hotel ends up playing a bigger role. Awesome as always.

Southpaw1430 over 3 years ago

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Chapters 1 - 5 I’m looking forward to the continuation of this excellent story. Thanks

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