All Comments on 'Incessant Pt. 08'

I don't know how you do it, usually I'm not a fan of stories where the couple adds a third person to their romance. There's a couple of exceptions, but as a general rule I don't like it. Somehow I love their dynamic AND am so fond of Riley and ummm (hotel teen, sorry it's 130 in the am so my brain isn't working lol) that I hope they're ALL happy together. I usually hate stories like this, but all these characters have me so drawn in that I love them all. I can't wait for more. I even hope their aunty can at least stay on their good side. (I'm not ready to forgive her enough for her to live with them permanently yet)

Still good writing but I'm not sure the plot moved much in this episode... 4*